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 2/16/2009 2:29 PM
 

Hi guys! I decided I wanted to try to write a Twilight fic, so here I am. I used to go on the Jonas Brothers fangap and do this, but no one ever read my stories, so I decided to try it out here and actually finish a story. I really hope you like the story!
-Lauren

The Lion and the Lamb

Chapter 1 :Big News

  This morning didn't feel like a regular morning, not even close. On aregular morning, I would have hit "Snooze" on my alarm clock about 10 times before slowly deciding to get out of bed.But no, today was different, and I could feel it. I got up right after the alarm went off and did'nt even bother to hit "Snooze" once. I ran past the old school pictures of my sister and I, and down the old, creaky stairs of the too small house my family lived in and headed to the kitchen. My parents and my twin sister were sitting around the table already, my sister was already finished getting ready for school and my parents were dressed for work. "Whoa! You're up rather early!" my dad said as I quickly stumbled across the kitchen to find some breakfast. I settled on cereal and ate as fast as I could.

  "Honey, slow down, you'll choke! Why are you eating so fast? What's the rush?" mom asked me with concern planted on her face. "Because," I said between bites, "you and dad  have an important announcement, and I want to know!". My parents exchanged a quick glance and looked at me questiningly. "How did you know that?" dad asked. How I knew that, I don't even know, I just had a way of knowing. I can tell the phone is going to ring and who it's for before it actually happens, I know what people are thinking about at school, even if they don't say it out loud, I just know things. It's a sixth sense. "Oh well, we do have news," he continued without my answer. "We're moving, to Washington. Forks is the name of thetown. It's small, but nice. I grew up there and nothing has changed in the least," my mom said.

  Katie, who had quietly been finishing her homework, didn't like this idea. "What? Moving?Why? We only have one more year of high school after this new semester is over, and you want us to move?". "Yes, your dad i sbeing transferred up there for work, meaninmg we'll have to move with him. You two are already registered at the high school. By the time we get there, the semester will have started, but a few days of catch-up isn't hard, and-" mom was explaining when I cut her off, "When are we leaving?". My mom let out a sigh and answered my question, "Today will be your last day. When your father and I told you to pack to stay with grandma for a week or two, well we lied. We weren't  ready to tell you guys yet. Make sure you clean out your room so we can pack while you're at school, because we're leaving immediatly afterwords". Great, now I would have to go to school and tell all my friends they'll never see me again. Oh, wait, I don't have any friends. I guess this will be an easy day then.

There's chapter 1! I know it's short, but that only means more chapters!!! Tell me what you think of this so far, I want you to be completely honest!!!!


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 1/28/2010 10:33 AM
 

It's good, I liked it so far. You definately need to add more, maybe even be more descriptive at the beginning. It's a great start.


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 8/18/2011 6:44 PM
 

You definetly need to add more descriptions and edit it at least 5 times. T=You tend to stutter over our words and the book can be difficult to read. YOu have a great plot and I would be interested in reading more!

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